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suzi · Joined: 05 Dec 2007 Posts: 76 Location: warrington,cheshire

Good evening all

I now that this isn't VA stuff but love the fact you are all very honest (good and bad). If you have a couple of minutes let me know what you think about a new website I have created.

Any feedback appreciated.

www.altrinchamlocks.co.uk

Suzi

vpa-ni · Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 9:46 pm Post subject:

Just had a look for you - the date on the first page is June 2011?

Also I would suggest using a similar font throughout (different sizes are OK) but I just feel my eyes needed to keep adjusting when flicking through the pages.

Otherwise nice site.
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Sally@Stonetext · Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:30 pm Post subject:

Just had a quick scan of the home page. There are a few typos.

The image at the bottom of a group of people with their thumbs up. Yes, I can see where you're coming from with that image but I would have thought that a tradesman actually doing something would be more in keeping, or how about hubby (or photogenic member of staff) standing next to an ALS liveried van?

I agree with Heather about the use of too many font types. Stick to 2, you can use different sizes, bold, italic, underline and colour (not all at once I might add) to provide variation but without sending the senses into overload.

The page tag for your home page is Suzi 1 >> My wordpress blog - not exactly a great way to advertise your business.

You need to go through the site with a fine toothcomb, or better still get someone else to look at every page with a fresh pair of eyes because you're obviously too close to it. Just had a quick squint at another couple of pages and they're littered with typos too.

Site 'feels' nice though.
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suzi · Joined: 05 Dec 2007 Posts: 76 Location: warrington,cheshire

Thanks for looking - all points taken on board.

Got somebody reading through for typos!!! writing and designing it seems to blank you brain when reading it through again!!!!!

Should be ready to go live next week.

Suzi

Laura1 · Star Poster Joined: 19 May 2011 Posts: 131

Looks a nice site to me :)
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projectfriday · Joined: 21 Oct 2011 Posts: 6 Location: Leeds

I like! I went to BTH High School in Altrincham :)

Ah the good old days of calling it "Alty"!